花容灼灼

盧若希

新葉

雙燕飛
(對(duì)聯(lián)體●七絕)


半闕癡詞對(duì)月誦
一支醉筆順風(fēng)揮
柔香淡淡千桃綻
細(xì)雨朦朦雙燕飛


Double Swallows Fly
(Two Pairs of Couplets●Seven Words of Quatrain)


Half an obsessed lyrics reciting to the moon
A drunk pen waving to tailwind
Soft fragrance light, thousand peaches in bloom
Double swallows fly, drizzle dim


2017/2/17/羅志海寫(xiě)詩(shī)翻譯
On February 17, 2017, by Luo Zhihai, Poetry and Translation

農(nóng)工廣角

新葉 發(fā)表于 2017-2-17 11:23
雙燕飛
(對(duì)聯(lián)體●七絕)

拜讀

新葉

百川

(對(duì)聯(lián)體●五絕)

臘梅香雪野

羅者獵林嵐

志略著千卷

海懷聚百川

注：羅志海藏頭嵌名詩(shī)。

（一二句羅志海作，三四句黃小強(qiáng)作。）

One Hundred Rivers

(Two Pairs of Couplets●Five Words of Quatrain)

Winter sweet is fragrant in the snow field

Hunter hunts in the smoky forests

The bosom of sea gathers one hundred rivers

An ambition writes thousand volumes of poetry

Note: A hiding head poem with Luo Zhihai’s name.

(First andsecond sentences by Luo Zhihai. Third and fourth sentences by Huang Xiaoqiang.)

2017/2/16/羅志海寫(xiě)詩(shī)翻譯

On February 16, 2017, by Luo Zhihai, Poetry and Translation

新葉

風(fēng)有志
(對(duì)聯(lián)體●七絕)


北郊銜夢(mèng)夕陽(yáng)里
南嶺踏春細(xì)雨中
谷靜松高風(fēng)有志
才疏學(xué)淺我無(wú)能


The Wind Aspiring
(Two Pairs of Couplets●Seven Words of Quatrain)


In the northern suburbs in the sunset have a dream
In the south ridge in the drizzle go on spring outing
Valley quiet and pines high, the wind aspiring
Have little talent and less learning, I can do nothing


2017/2/18/羅志海寫(xiě)詩(shī)翻譯
On February 18, 2017, by Luo Zhihai, Poetry and Translation

新葉

鵝埠荔
(對(duì)聯(lián)體●十三絕)


長(zhǎng)恨淚，別離憂，東坡日照冰心暖
洛陽(yáng)花，鵝埠荔，南嶺春來(lái)?xiàng)盍�蘇
莫愁湖，桃葉渡，北海漁夫回故里
松竹徑，水雲(yún)鄉(xiāng)，西山月色染歸途


Ebu Litchis
(Two Pairs of Couplets●Thirteen Words of Quatrain)


Long hating tears and parting sorrows, sun shines on the east hillside, frozen hearts warm
Luoyang flowers and Ebu litchis, spring comes to the South Ridge, willows wake
No Sorrow Lake and Peach Leaf Ferry, in the North Sea, fishermen return to the native place
Pine and bamboo path and watery cloud village, in the West Mountain, moonlight dyes the returning way



2017/2/18/羅志海寫(xiě)詩(shī)翻譯
On February 18, 2017, by Luo Zhihai, Poetry and Translation

新葉

情逝
(對(duì)聯(lián)體●七絕)


才子風(fēng)流詩(shī)探路
美眉浪漫色攻關(guān)
月缺情逝人憔悴
花萎夢(mèng)消意惘然


Lovelorn
(Two Pairs of Couplets●Seven Words of Quatrain)


The gifted scholar dissolute, the poetry explores the way
The sex tackles key problems, the beauty romantic
Moon incomplete and lovelorn, persons haggard
Flowers wither and dream disappears, mind disappointed


2017/2/21/羅志海寫(xiě)詩(shī)翻譯
On February 21, 2017, by Luo Zhihai, Poetry and Translation

風(fēng)滿樓s

風(fēng)滿樓s

風(fēng)流不再。

新葉

春山秀
(對(duì)聯(lián)體●七絕)


筆下流泉景嫵嫵
池中盈墨韻悠悠
風(fēng)搖一樹(shù)春山秀
月枕三江夢(mèng)境幽


Spring Mountain Beautifully
(Two Pairs of Couplets●Seven Words of Quatrain)


Under the brush the running spring, the scenery charming
In the pool full of ink, the rhyme leisurely
Wind shakes a tree of spring mountain beautifully
Moon pillows three rivers of dreamland quietly


2017/2/23/羅志海寫(xiě)詩(shī)翻譯
On February 23, 2017, by Luo Zhihai, Poetry and Translation

風(fēng)滿樓s

細(xì)雨朦朦雙燕飛——正適時(shí)。

新葉

寂寂流螢
(對(duì)聯(lián)體●七絕)


寂寂流螢三百點(diǎn)
悠悠往事數(shù)十年
荷塘半畝匿星月
旭日一輪出海天


Silent Fireflies
(Two Pairs of Couplets●Seven Words of Quatrain)


Three hundred silent fireflies
Several years of leisure past
Half an acre of lotus pond hides moon and stars
A wheel of sunrise out of the sea and sky


2017/2/25/羅志海寫(xiě)詩(shī)翻譯
On February 25, 2017, by Luo Zhihai, Poetry and Translation

新葉

少煩腦

(對(duì)聯(lián)體●七絕)

日月二泉明白水

門兒一響鬩郷音

外無(wú)豔女少煩腦

家有嬌妻最貼心

注：

1）第一句廣東千年名聯(lián)上句，第二句曾紀(jì)番作，第三句第四句羅志海作。

2）“日月二泉明白水”是廣東一條千年名聯(lián)。至今無(wú)人工對(duì)。意思是，有兩道泉，一道叫日泉，一道叫月泉，是日月雙泉。兩道泉水清澈。日月為明，白水為泉，是明白水。

這句上聯(lián)，繁體字和簡(jiǎn)體字的書(shū)寫(xiě)是一樣的。近幾十年來(lái)，許多文人用簡(jiǎn)體字思維應(yīng)對(duì)，對(duì)出來(lái)的下聯(lián)不工。

曾紀(jì)番先生巧用繁體字應(yīng)對(duì)，對(duì)句“門兒一響鬩郷音”，工對(duì)。門兒為鬩，響即郷音。鬩郷音，意思是用鄉(xiāng)音吵嘴。

還有，上聯(lián)“二”對(duì)下聯(lián)“一”，數(shù)字對(duì)仗，工對(duì)。

上下聯(lián)平仄工對(duì)，如下：

日月二泉明白水  仄仄仄平平仄仄

門兒一響鬩郷音  平平仄仄仄平平

妙不可言。

2015年7月30日，我去汕尾探望曾紀(jì)番先生。得到曾老師對(duì)句。謹(jǐn)記。

7/30/2015

Trouble of Brain Less

(Two Pairs of Couplets●Seven Words of Quatrain)

Two springs of sun and moon, the bright and whitewater

One sound of door son, quarrel with localaccent

Without a pretty female outside, trouble of brain less

There is a young and beautiful wife in home, the most intimate

Note:

1) First sentence is half a famous millennium couplet in Guangdong, China. Second sentence by ZengJifan. Third and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.)

2）“Twosprings of sun and moon, the bright and white water”, that’s a first line of famousmillennium couplet of Guangdong. Up to now, no one neat and orderly to make asecond line of a couplet. It means, there are two springs, one was named SunSpring, another was named moon spring. They are sun and moon springs. Twospring water clear. Sun(日)+moon(月)=bright(明).White(白)+water(水)=spring(泉). Theyare the bright and white water.

The first line of couplet,its traditional and simplified Chinese characters are same. In recent decades,many literati made the second line with thinking of simplified Chinesecharacters. But their second lines weren’t neat and orderly.

Mr. ZengJifan clever to made the second line with traditional  Chinese characters. The second line of thecouplet “One sound of door son, quarrel with local accent”, neat and orderly.Door(門)+son(兒)=quarrel(鬩).Local(郷)+accent (音)=sound(響).鬩郷音means quarrel with local accent.

There, twoin the first line antithesis of one in the second line,number antithesis. Neat andorderly.

The firstand second lines of couplet are neat and orderly in the level and oblique tones. As follows:

日月二泉明白水  oblique oblique, oblique level, level oblique oblique

門兒一響鬩郷音  level level, oblique oblique, obliquelevel level

It’s toowonderful for words.

In July 30,2015, I went to Shanwei to see Mr. Zeng Jifan. Got Mr. Zeng’s second line ofcouplet. Bear in mind.

2017/2/25/羅志海寫(xiě)詩(shī)翻譯

On February 25, 2017, by Luo Zhihai, Poetry and Translation

風(fēng)滿樓s

新葉

竹先生

(對(duì)聯(lián)體●七絕)

寒冬不說(shuō)風(fēng)涼話

炎夏又燃鬼火燈

選美首推梅小姐

拔高還數(shù)竹先生

Mr. Bamboo

(Two Pairs of Couplets●Seven Words of Quatrain)

I

n hot summer, again fire a wildfire

In the cold winter, don’t say irresponsible and sarcastic remarks

Unduly praise Mr. Bamboo only

Beauty contest first recommend Miss Plum

2017/2/25/羅志海寫(xiě)詩(shī)翻譯

On February 25, 2017, by Luo Zhihai, Poetry andTranslation

新葉

寒云
(對(duì)聯(lián)體●七絕)


一潭秋水飛鴻杳
千里寒云落葉黃
榕下蟬聲吟月色
荷邊蜂影品花香


Cold Clouds
(Two Pairs of Couplets●Seven Words of Quatrain)


A pond of autumn water, the flying wild geese remote
Thousand miles of cold clouds, the fallen leaves yellow
Under ficus microcarpa, sounds of cicadas recite the moonlight
Beside the lotus, taste the flower fragrance, the bee’s shadow


2017/2/28/羅志海寫(xiě)詩(shī)翻譯
On February 28, 2017, by Luo Zhihai, Poetry and Translation

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